Tuesday, 9 April 2013
Ok - So here's the ideas for the main body of the essay.
Firstly, make sure you comment on a range of devices throughout your essay. That way you are showing a thorough understanding of the author's purposes.
For example, the way the stage is set up speaks quite highly concerning the subject of RESPONSIBILITY. Look at the opening stage directions where it describes how 'heavily comfortable' the house is (implying that no care has been given to the amount spent etc). Look at the descriptions of port/cigars/champagne. Remember that the original audience for this play was currently in a war situation and on ration for even the most basic of amenities. The playwright here is hinting at the lack of responsibility shown by the upper classes in their spending and hoarding of wealth, especially as we go on to find out that a poor girl has committed suicide due to being left with no other choice.
The stage directions are heavily important throughout the play. Look at how the lighting changes in the opening directions, for example. The lights change from a comfortable 'pink' before the inspector arrives, to ' hard and bright' after he arrives. The playwright has used the opening directions to hint at the responsibility of this family for the death of Eva Smith. He does this by making the scene look like an interrogation through his use of bright lighting - subconsciously hinting to the audience that this 'everyday' family are responsible for things that they have not even considered.
The Inspector, as well as being a main character, is a fantastic DRAMATIC DEVICE and you should refer to him throughout your essay in the same way that his influence runs throughout the play. He has been mad into a deliberately vague character. His name 'Goole' (Ghoul) hints that there may be something supernatural about him, implying that the things you are RESPONSIBLE FOR will catch up with you eventually. There is no escape from the consequences of your actions. In a way, Goole is a little bit like the ghosts from Dickens' 'A Christmas Carol'. It seems that he is coming to give the Birling family a chance to REPENT for what they have done. Perhaps, if they take this opportunity to REALISE what they have done, then fate will look sparingly on them in future. Look at how he enters the play to back this up. The fact that no one know where he has come from etc. The mystery surrounding him. You will find many quotes to support this. Pages 169-171.
The Inspector acts as a sort of moral compass. He is not just the voice of the playwright, but also the voice of the common people and the voice of socialism. His views are not particularly radical. Look at how he talks to people. FIND SOME QUOTES. He is not particularly rude to people but he is stubborn and outspoken. A lot of the things he says are simply concerned with bringing attention to how each individual characters is RESPONSIBLE for their actions. His words permeate throughout the play. The watching audience would see the Inspector as a force to be reckoned with; somebody who has come to put the Birlings in their place (however, remember that the Birlings could represent any well-to-do family of the time, and at this time, it would have been more wealthy people who would have been sitting in the theatre stalls!). The fact that the Inspector is an authority figure is important too. THis means that people are more likely to take notice of what he says. Those that don't (Mrs Birling for example) appear hugely arrogant and bigoted. They won't even take notice of what an authoritative figure has to say on the matter!
JUST SO YOU KNOW, THIS HAS ALREADY BEEN 600 WORDS! WE HAVEN'T EVEN STARTED LOOKING AT INDIVIDUAL CHARACTERS YET!
So, anyway, you can then begin to look at and analyse the responsibility of each character in the play. The dramatic STRUCTURE of the play assists this greatly. The entire play is set in one room, and the setting does not change at all throughout the play (LOOK AT THE STAGE DIRECTIONS AT THE START OF EACH ACT FOR EVIDENCE). This means that the room takes on the appearance of an interrogation room; emphasising the responsibility of each character for the death of Eva Smith. This is further exacerbated by the fact that the characters 'take it in turns' to come into the room to be interrogated by the inspector, almost as if we are watching some sort of court case. You will find many quotations to back this up if you have a flick through the play.
Then, the Inspector starts to make his way through the characters one-by-one. The first character is Birling. With this episode, the playwright is able to bring out his views on 'The Welfare State'. Birling's role in Eva's death is that he sacked her for asking for fairer pay conditions. Look at pages 170-176 to find your quotes. The reason responsibility is important here is two-fold. Firstly, Birling seems shocked and incredulous that he could possibly have had anything to do with her death, as he had not seen her for two years. Here, the audience is being reminded that anybody that we have anything to do with is partly our responsibility as we never know what sort of effect we might have on a person. Birling's quote 'If we were responsible for everybody we'd ever had anything to do with, it would be very awkward....' is massively important. In the eyes of the Inspector, that is exactly how things are. We ARE RESPONSIBLE for others; it doesn;t matter how AWKWARD that is. It is just a fact of life. The quote shows Birling's attitude towards responsibility. ie, he does not feel responsible AT ALL, especially when dealing with somebody outside of his social class. The second reason why his is important is that it shows how IRRESPONSIBLE the upper classes were in terms of the way they treated workers. In 1912, workers had NO RIGHT (No minimum wage, no unions, no employment law). This was an exploitative and unfair system designed to benefit the minority and opress the majority. Birling's lack of responsible behaviour is further demonstrated by the fact that he sacked Eva Smith from employment, even thought the foreman of the factory had recently recommended her for a promotion. He was planning to PROMOTE her, but instead SACKED HER simply because she had the audacity to ask for better working conditions. This is a stark message from the playwright concerning how we should treat people of lower classes. Birling's refusal to take responsibility for his actions (FIND A QUOTE) is an attack on the older mmbers of the upper class - stuck in their ways and soon to be made sorry for their actions.
The next character to be questioned by the Inspector is Sheila. She is a member of the younger generation and shows signs of wanting to take responsibility for her actions, but not before she has shown a more sinister side to her character. Priestley uses this scene to attack the superficial characteristics of the upper class. Sheila goes out of her way to request that Eva Smith is sacked from her job at MILWARDS because she believes that Eva laughed/smiled behind her back when she tried on a dress in the shop. This should hopefully serve as a huge lesson to the watching audience (ie, look at the effect that your selfishness and superficiality can have on a person). This is proven even further when Sheila asks if the girl who has killed herself was 'Pretty?'. This emphasises the idea that the upper classes are only concerned with outward appearance (think about Birling's impending Knighthood for example), rather than personal wellbeing. (PAGES 177-180 WILL BE BEST FOR FINDING QUOTES HERE). However, once Sheila realises what she has done, she appears to repent deeply - not just here but also later on in the play. She things such as that she would do anything to be able to go back and change things etc. The audience will probably relate to her and sympathise with her. Many of the audience members may have found themselves in similar positions to th Birlings before, and so this is a lesson to them in terms of how they should act.
Next up is Gerald who is guilty of having n affair with Eva Smith/Daisy Renton. On page 182, Gerald is so concerned with outward appearance, and so lacking in willingness to take RESPONSIBILITY for his actions that he even asks his fiance to help him to keep the details of the affair from the Inspector. This shows he is far more concerned with what society thinks that the people he is supposed to care most deeply about. Between pages 189-193 (FIND QUOTES) we learn of Gerald's affair with Daisy Renton when he was supposed to be in a relationship with Sheila Birling. Note how none of the Birling's ever seem particularly angry with Gerald over this. It is almost as though they do not have to face the RESPONSIBILITY of what he has done, provided the details never find their way out into the public domain. Gerald is certainly not all bad. At first, if we forget the fact that he is being unfaithful, he certainly seems to treat Daisy Renton with a great deal of respect. It almost seems like he feels genuine guilt for the fact that she is at such a low social status whilst he is in a particularly comfortable position. (FOND QUOTES). To a point, one could argue that he very definitely takes RESPONSIBILITY for her. He doesn't just use her for sex (although he doesn't exactly turn it down either!) and he seems, genuinely, to want to make a difference to her life. However, his responsibility to her fails when he is effectively forced to choose between keeping her a secret or admitting to the relationship in a legitimate fashion (something which he is simply not prepared to do). In some ways, Gerald is worse than the rest of them, for two reasons. Firstly, he is the only one who seems to genuinely have FEELINGS for Daisy Renton/Eva Smith, yet he is not prepared to take RESPONSIBILITY for his feelings to the extent that he will fully let her into his life. Secondly, he provides Eva Smith/Daisy Renton with a fantastic lifestyle, only to cruelly take it away from her. It may have been better if she had never known the difference. That way, she could have avoided huge disappointment. Look at how Gerald takes responsibility for what he has done. Do you think he does/doesn't? What makes you think that?
The next characters interrogated by the Inspector is certainly the cruelest - Mrs Birling. It is massively important to point out that Mrs Birling (as it says at the start of the play) is Mr Birling's social superior. So, there certainly seems to be a correlation between social status and a lack of responsibility taken for actions. This is a huge message to the audience. Mrs Birling is almost protrayed as a 'pantomime villain' - a rich a heartless character that the audience can really hate. The fact that Mrs Birling is the head of a charity is vitally important. Evidently, charities were the only organisation there to HELP the poor at this time. The idea that someone in charge could act like this shows that they are not RESPONSIBLE in the slightest. Her job as head/patron of the charity is simply to extend her social standing, not because she cares about people. This is shown in stark detail when on page 197 she states that she actively used her influence to ensure that Eva Smith/Daisy Renton did not receive help. Not only is this a failure to take responsibility, it is downright vindictive cruelty. In the following pages (198-200), Mrs Birling then goes on to state that she has done nothing wrong, and that the true responsibility lies with the girl herself and the father of the child (an opinion which soon disappears when she realises that the father was her own son!). Investigate the parts of the text where Mrs Birling talks about responsibility, and PEE it to death! It is HUGELY important.
Lastly, we can plainly see where Eric's responsibility lies. He is/was the father of Eva/Daisy's unborn child. He has been totally irresponsible. Not only is he an alcoholic, but he also actively went out to find sex on the night that he first met Eva. We are told that he forced his way into her appartment, and can only assume that she had sex somewhat against her will. Obviously this would not have been reported as 'rape' at the time. Who would have believed a poor, working class girl over a upper/middle class businessman? In his favour, Eric tries to take responsibility for the situation by providing money to Eva once he realises that she is pregnant, but he does this in the most IRRESPONSIBLE way, by stealing money. Arguably, she acts infinitely more responsible than him by refusing to accept stolen money. Really, the responsible thing to do would have been for him to publicly admit what he had done and marry Eva Smith, but Eric proves himself to be just as spineless as his parents in terms of this. However, he certainly seems remorseful and repentant when he realises the consequences of what he has done. FIND QUOTES AND PEE regrading how he takes responsibility for his actions.
It is worth mentioning here that Eric is an alcoholic, (comment on the stage directions on page 203) AND YET HIS OWN FAMILY HAVE NOT NOTICED. They do not even take full responsibility for their own children, let alone anybody else.
The ending of the play is confusing and hugely important. Before the Inspector leaves, he delivers a few lengthy speeches regarding the family's responsibility and the state of the world. He is talking to the AUDIENCE here, as well as the Birlings. He states that there are many more like Eva SMith who still need to be helped. This is a MISSION STATEMENT. Audience members are supposed to hear this and CHANGE THEIR WAYS. We then watch the end of the play to see whether or not the Birlings take the same warning.
We could assume, for example, that if the Birlings had all said (We feel terrible. We can't believe wat we've done. We are going to live the rest of our lives making sure that the poor are treated fairly, and that we act responsibly) then the horrible ending to the play would not have happened. In literary terms, this is where the Birlings should have 'Learned their lesson', in the same way that Scrooge does in 'A Christmas Carol'. However, in this play, the family do not learn their lesson and they are effectively PUNISHED for it. Once the family figure out that Goole is not a real inspector, and that there is not really a suicide victim lying dead in the local hospital, they suddenly forget about all of the horrible, cruel things they have done, and begin to celebrate again. Provided they can 'cover up' what they have done, they will be happy. Once they have made this decision not to heed the warning of the inspector, the phone call comes through to inform them that they will now have to face the 'real life' trial concerning a 'real life' suicide (at least that is how I always read it anyway). They are given one last chance to take responsibility and repent - but they don't. Well, some of them don't anyway. The younger generation sort of do. You will need to put this isnto your own words, and use LOTS OF QUOTES from the text to back it up using PEE.
So, there you go! I've provided you with 2500 words of ideas, and you only have to write around 1000. Obviously I have not provided you with all the evidence that you need, but I have pointed you towards the right pages in most instances. Devote a couple of hours to this making notes, and you should be fine.
Essay plan is up to you. It should roughly follow this pattern,
Intro - Outlining themes and background
Around 8 - 10 paragraphs where you talk about any of the issues outlined above. How is RESPONSIBILITY important in relation to characters/text/structure/stage directions/messages to the audience.
Conclusion - summing up why responsibility was such an important issue in this play in relation to what was going on in the world at the time.
Good luck!
NW
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